tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7659982039332247149.post2270822465353569517..comments2011-04-25T16:53:10.836-07:00Comments on The Lightning Bug: Shades of Gray - Chapter OneJP45http://www.blogger.com/profile/10462361605817218192noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7659982039332247149.post-39596498008582598782011-04-25T16:04:08.643-07:002011-04-25T16:04:08.643-07:00I agree, nice flow. I easily can picture the chara...I agree, nice flow. I easily can picture the character in these locations. Favorite line: "Many of them had been his teachers, and the generation gap was a wide gulf between them. They were friendly, but not friends." Just a good description.Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11822555681696426543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7659982039332247149.post-52217505357475764022011-04-04T05:24:40.344-07:002011-04-04T05:24:40.344-07:00Thanks for checking it out. Keep reading!Thanks for checking it out. Keep reading!JP45https://www.blogger.com/profile/10462361605817218192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7659982039332247149.post-90131749938656815722011-04-03T05:48:31.510-07:002011-04-03T05:48:31.510-07:00I like your style. Excellent flow, and very reada...I like your style. Excellent flow, and very readable. I can't wait for the next chapter...Garnethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02401188830560417180noreply@blogger.com