tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7659982039332247149.post7988387070049723652..comments2011-04-25T16:53:10.836-07:00Comments on The Lightning Bug: Shades of Gray: Chapter TenJP45http://www.blogger.com/profile/10462361605817218192noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7659982039332247149.post-87413407122351854342011-04-25T16:53:10.836-07:002011-04-25T16:53:10.836-07:00Love the last line. Love it! Poignant.
I like th...Love the last line. Love it! Poignant. <br /><br />I like this entire chapter, my favorite yet I think. It's the meat and potatoes of the story right here it seems, where we really get to know more about Ted. However, the comment in a previous chapter about the POV changing, it does that in this chapter as well. It's now Jill's story, which I think works here, but just pointing it out since it was pointed out earlier.Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11822555681696426543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7659982039332247149.post-43343342236682823652011-04-07T03:57:53.016-07:002011-04-07T03:57:53.016-07:00The description of the Inn is exquisite, though th...The description of the Inn is exquisite, though the description of a fragrant breakfast torture while I'm eating my usual cold bowl of All Bran with Extra Fiber! *laughs*Garnethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02401188830560417180noreply@blogger.com